Prince of the Astral Kingdom Chapter 1 pg 68

16th Dec 2018, 10:59 AM in The Beast of the Medina Azzahra
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Prince of the Astral Kingdom Chapter 1 pg 68
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Zachary Cullen Alford 16th Dec 2018, 10:59 AM edit delete
Zachary Cullen Alford
A huge apology for the long absence everybody! Been super busy!!! Also, the last panel on this page really put me through the ringer. It was HARD! Crowd scenes are not my strong suit and this one presented extra challenges,i.e. what is a Ghoric God ritual??? I've also had to go back and change some dialogue from page 63 to allow for this scene. The reason I did this is so I can add some action in the next scene. I feel its been too long without some good ol' blood and guts! And it allows me to introduce a pivotal event of my story sooner, that was originally planned for much later.

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warp9 16th Dec 2018, 3:10 PM edit delete reply
warp9
Glad to see you back!
BUMBLEBEE 16th Dec 2018, 7:46 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
“But enough about the mission - let’s party!”
Zachary Cullen Alford 17th Dec 2018, 10:00 AM edit delete reply
Zachary Cullen Alford
Yes! Ha ha!But when I originally wrote the story, there was no party. They just left immediately for their mission. But by having them instead spend the night, I can actually speed up my story arc. Doesn't sound like it makes sense, but trust me, this next scene contains a plot device that begins to unravel the mystery of Rhinn.
chris-tar 16th Dec 2018, 8:09 PM edit delete reply
chris-tar
That last panel is a masterpiece, I especially love the colors!
"Good OL' Blood and Guts!" A man after my own heart!
Can't wait! Lol
snuffysam 16th Dec 2018, 8:43 PM edit delete reply
snuffysam
It seems our guest wasn't exactly entertained by said feast...
Zachary Cullen Alford 17th Dec 2018, 3:42 AM edit delete reply
Zachary Cullen Alford
LOL! At first I had him raising a glass and smiling (a crocodile smile). But it didn't really seem godly enough. He's smiling inside.
AmeliaP 17th Dec 2018, 11:16 PM edit delete reply
AmeliaP
"It was HARD! Crowd scenes are not my strong suit and this one presented extra challenges" I'm with you, 100%. Crowd scenes take me forever to do as well. GREAT page, btw ^^
Zachary Cullen Alford 18th Dec 2018, 3:46 PM edit delete reply
Zachary Cullen Alford
Thanks, Amelia! Always love your comments!