Prince of thr Astral Kingdom Chapter 1 pg 17

9th Mar 2018, 2:25 AM in The Beast of the Medina Azzahra
Prince of thr Astral Kingdom Chapter 1 pg 17
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chris-tar 9th Mar 2018, 5:25 AM
chris-tar
If I were writing the story, I would have the protagonist throw a hidden dagger into the oncoming pack leader... but perhaps that is hackneyed...
Zachary Cullen Alford 9th Mar 2018, 3:18 PM
Zachary Cullen Alford
Well, he's a little preoccupied at the moment. And he's supposed to be running out of steam. I guess I didn't make the visual fit the narrative very well. My bad.
chris-tar 9th Mar 2018, 3:35 PM
chris-tar
You haven't failed at anything. Maybe I am too dull to interpret it properly? But I understand that in order to become better at one's craft, you must often be your own worst critic.
snuffysam 9th Mar 2018, 2:08 PM
snuffysam
Weakness? What weakness, that he just killed one of your men?
Zachary Cullen Alford 9th Mar 2018, 3:13 PM
Zachary Cullen Alford
I know! I was going to say that too. With a flying leap and a perfect front somersault. But I guess he's breathing heavily now. Maybe I should add some of your style sound effects, like "STAGGER".
snuffysam 9th Mar 2018, 3:15 PM
snuffysam
Ha ha, that would be hilarious!
AmeliaP 11th Mar 2018, 10:30 PM
AmeliaP
I think the strategy of the leader of keeping a safe distance is right. Usually who's leading the troop is back because he has to see and define the situation to command his men to the next move. I didn't think it was a wrong strategy of the leader being out of the reach until now.
Zachary Cullen Alford 12th Mar 2018, 2:49 AM
Zachary Cullen Alford
Right! But he has to act now if he doesn't want to maybe have to face our hero alone! Ha ha!
AmeliaP 26th Mar 2018, 9:53 PM
AmeliaP
Oh yeah :)
AmeliaP 26th Mar 2018, 10:15 PM
AmeliaP
Can't wait to see the prince taking down the leader.